My Part Time Job

I’m going to write about my part time job. I have friends who recommended me to start this part time job, so we work together. We work at Karaoke in Kumamoto city. I think that the salary is higher than other part time job which I had worked. And then, we like to sing a song, so we can sing without money every day. In addition, there are other great points. One thing, jobs members are very interesting. Other thing, the building has beautiful and cool. It is interesting for me to work at the Karaoke. I will do my best.

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I studied these sentences in my class. I know that these sentences are wrong, but I don’t know correct sentences.  Please tell me correct answer, Mr. Tomei.

The shop opens at a.m. 10.

I will absent next week.

I met an accident.

Japanese traditional clothes.

I am not strong for alcohol.

Almost Japanese people like rice.

He was sleeping yet.

My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse.

I went shopping with Mari, Natsumi, and so on.

My another sister is a dentist.

I have an appointment with my friend.

I was ashamed because I made a mistake.

How much are these jeans cost?

This store has a bargain in December.

I did not eat anything because I eat not hungry.

I became to like coffee when I was 16.

Her husband did not believe the online store.

I had a breakfast at 8 o’clock.

I came here by car.

I have to hand in this report until Friday.

I had a part-time job, but the pay is cheap.

My car is red color.

Jane is a thirteen-years-old-girl.

I was bad condition.

How is your neck condition?

The bus service is very convenience.

My hometown is countryside.

Three foreign guests came to our café.

The day, it was raining.

I play soccer on Saturday.

My dream is an English teacher.

I studied English during I was in London.

He is easy to get angry.

Every time, I am tired.

I am expected you.

I like him very much.

It’s my first time to do this.

I forgot my dictionary at home.

Please tell me the way to Kumamoto Station.

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Ahiru no Sora

My favorite comic is Ahiru No Sora which story is about high school basketball. The main character is Sora who is good at playing a basketball, but he is very small. His height is one hundred and fifty eight, so almost basketball players have high height. However, Sora is very cool because though he is dwarf, he is good at playing basketball. By the way, other characters are individual. I like Nanao Nana who is manager of Kuzuryu high school basketball club because she is very cute and kind, especially she has a lot of knowledge about basketball. This comic’s story has never finished since 2014 May, so I am looking forward to reading the next story. I think that I want to read as soon as I can.

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Romeo and Juliet Rewrite

I am going to write about the movie which I watched. The title of this movie is Romeo

and Juliet. Everyone knows this movie but it is different from the normal story so I was

surprised at this movie when I watched it for the first time. The main character is

Leonard DiCaprio in this movie. This story is a love story. There are two groups. One is

the Montagues. Other is the Capulets. They are strongest mafia family in the Beach.

They have an adversarial relationship. They often fight every day. Romeo belongs in the

Montague family. On the other hand, Juliet belongs in the Capulet family.

One day, Romeo met beautiful girl at Capulet’s party, and he was in love with her.

Unfortunately, she is from the Capulet family. Her name is Juliet. After that, Romeo and

Juliet held a wedding ceremony secretly. After that, the trouble happened. Tybalt killed

Mercutio using knife. And then, Romeo killed Tybalt, so Romeo was banished from the

country. Romeo and Juliet ran away together. However, their plan was not a success.

Romeo thought that Juliet was dead, but she was alive. Romeo committed suicide using

poison. He drank the poison, and he died. Juliet finds Romeo and commits suicide too.

I am going to write about my impressions. I think that this story is very sad, so Romeo

and Juliet are an ideal couple. We are university students, so we have met couples such

as this couple. Romeo is very cool. The reason why is Romeo is Leonard DiCaprio.

Everyone thinks that we want to be his face. If we have his face, we would enjoy our life

everyday more. I think that I wahavent to watch Japanese version of this movie. If

there were such a movie in japan, I am going to recommend everyone. It is interesting

for me to watch this movie.

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Cool Hand Luke Rewrite

I am going to write about the movie which is named Cool Hand Luke. This story is a

prison break story, so I like this story. The main character is Luke Jackson. He was

soldier in America. He was a great soldier but he was caught by the police. The reason

why is he drank liquor, and he broke a parking meter. Then he was going to be

imprisoned in a prison. My first impression about watching this movie is I am

interested in the prison break story. It is very interesting for me to watch the Cool Hand

Luke, so I am looking forward to watching the rest of the movie. The reason why is I do

not have enough time, so I am very busy. After the training ended, I watched the rest of

this movie. In the prison, there are a lot of police. They were very bad persons. Luke

Jackson resists their violence. Then, they shut him in a lonely prison. However shutting

him in a lonely prison is a bad plan for him because he decided on doing a prison break

in this prison. He tried a prison break sometimes, but he was caught by the police.

When he won the fight with Dragline who was the boss in this prison, he became the

boss in this prison. Then he tried to escape with Dragline. However they were caught by

police again. When they were caught, Luke Jackson was killed by police using pistol. He

wanted to see his mother. It was a very sad story.

I enjoyed watching this movie. This movie is different from what my friend told me and

my first impression for this movie. On the other hand, another friend said this story is

not interesting. Probably, I thought that this movie is very old. I want to watch the

movie which is newer than Cool Hand Luke.

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Glee Rewrite

I will write about the TV drama which is glee season 1. This movie is an American TV show, and it is a music TV show. The Glee club will be disbanded in McKinley high school. This story’s main character is Will who is man, and a high school teacher in this school. He became the teacher of charge for the New Directions Glee club. First, this club’s members are only 5 persons whose names are Rachel, Mercedes, Tina, Kurt and Artie. They do music. They want to be a winner. The reason why is they are tormentd, because they are a minority. They need to win in the state tournament. If it were not for the championship in the state tournament, their club would have to close. However, Teri told about her pregnancy to Will. Will thought that he would stop being a high school teacher, and looking for new work. So he wants to earn much money for their child. Then the glee club was about to break up. However, everyone sings “Don’t stop Believin”. Will listened to this song, and he decided to continue as the McKinley high school teacher.

When I watched this movie, I thought that music is very nice. It is very interesting for me to watch this movie because I like to listen to music and to sing a song. “Don’t Stop Believin” is a good song. On the other hand, I thought that the bullying is scary. However, American minority people are saying their thinking. It is great for Japanese to say their thinking because Japanese can not talk. Glee gives me sprit, and I think that we never give up. Other things, I can know that how to sing of American people, so it is nice for me to watch how they sing. I want to watch the next story as soon as I can. I think this TV drama is very great.

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